ENC 1101
FRESHMAN COMPOSITION

FALL SEMESTER 2002

 

Instructor Jacqueline London-Kohlem
 
English Dept. ACI- Lecturer’s Office

Tel. 305 919 5857

e-mail:  londonkj@fiu.edu   Office hours: TBA

Sec. 54/ Reference no. /M&W 9:30-10:45

 

RECOMMENDED TEXTS: a good thesaurus, and a recent dictionary

REQUIRED TEXTS:  The Bedford Handbook, Diana Hacker, 6th edition.  

                              Patterns for College Writing, Kirszner & Mandell, 8th edition.          

COURSE POLICY AND DESCRIPTION:

Enc 1101 is designed to improve your writing skills.  The theme this semester that will connect our short stories  will be family relationships.  You will learn about the different modes of discourse and how to use them skilfully by discussing, analysing and interpreting selected short stories from Patterns for College Writing.  Some aspects of fiction that will be covered are theme & character.  The assigned stories are to be read twice prior to our class meetings and are intended to stimulate classroom discussions.  In addition, we will read various essays about controversial issues and react to them both in written and oral form. . I will help you to learn to read critically, and to analyse and  argue a point. The format of the classroom will include lectures, informal class discussions and group workshops. Therefore attendance is mandatory.  Students with writing problems and/or ESL problems will be required to go to the writing lab consistently to get additional assistance.  Those who do not go will jeopardise their grades.

COURSE OBJECTIVES:  

1.       To learn to write well organised and well developed compositions.

2.       To demonstrate the ability to support a main idea in an essay.

3.       To learn the writing process including pre-writing, developing a thesis statement, supporting the thesis with evidence, organising and writing the final draft

4.       To demonstrate the ability to think and write critically

5.       To learn the MLA method of parenthetical documentation. 

EVALUATION:

In-class writing assignment #1 -  3 pages/750 words         . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .            20%

Critical analysis  /  SEPTEMBER 18 

In–class writing assignment #2 – 3 pages/750 words    . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .           20%

Critical analysis / DECEMBER 4 

ESSAYS:  all essays must be 3 to 4 pages in length/750-1000 words:

Comparison & contrast essay . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  .            20%

DUE OCTOBER 7

Comparison & Contrast essay: collaborative project & oral debate  . . .  .  . . . . . . . .      20%

3 to 4 pages/750-1000 words

DUE  OCTOBER 28 & 30

Argument & Persuasion essay  3 to 4 pages/750-1000 words. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   20%

DUE NOVEMBER 25

Format for Essays:

Both in-class writing assignments will be a critical analysis of readings we have covered in class. They will be open book tests and students will be expected to integrate parenthetical documentation (MLA) from the primary texts. They will each count for  20% of your grade = 40%.

 The comparison and contrast essay should be based on any two stories of your choice from Patterns e.g., a critical analysis of theme or character. You can not use stories that we have discussed in class. In class workshops will prepare you with the experience you need to write this essay = 20%.

The collaborative comparison and contrast project will be done in small groups of four. Each student will write his/her own paper on a topic that the group has mutually decided upon. The presentation will be graded collaboratively. You may use any method of presentation you like e.g., debate, panel discussion, role playing, lecture. A final draft of the presentation concept is required. Students will be allowed class time to prepare for their collaborative essays.  The first session is the conceptual phase. A topic should be chosen and the focus of the essay should be determined. In addition, the workload should be distributed.  Students must then develop their own ideas on the topic and do research if necessary.  This information should be brought in writing to the second session. The third session will be devoted to creating the first conceptual draft from the various parts. Students will have time to discuss the work they have brought in and the format of their presentation. The polishing of the final presentation draft will be done per e-mail. Each student is responsible for turning in his/her own polished final essay. The collaborative presentation essay should be brought to class with photocopies that will be distributed to the other groups for peer critiquing. The presentations will be videotaped for feedback on technique, content and structure. Students will be graded 10% for their individual papers and 10% for the collaborative presentation and draft-20%.

Any student who fails to do his/or her share of the group work will be given an F for the entire assignment (written and presentation).

FORMAT FOR SUBMISSION OF ASSIGNMENTS

All papers are to be typed on 8 ½” x 11” plain white paper.

Margins – 1.5”all around

Lines – double spaced

Paragraph – indent 5 spaces

Title page – refer to MLA format in handbook

ATTENDANCE POLICY: Please note attendance is mandatory. You are allowed 3 absences without penalty. After that each absence will result in a letter grade cut per absence.  Also, no late papers will be accepted. Students who interrupt the class by coming in late consistently will also be given half a letter grade cut for excessive interruptions. In class writing assignments cannot be made up.  Class participation demands your presence. 

GRADING CRITERIA

You should have two goals in this class. The first should be to improve your writing and reading skills. The second should be to get a good grade in this class. In order to accomplish both of these goals, you should attend all of the classes and write frequently. This means that you will be writing several drafts of each essay before turning in the final copy for a grade. I will be giving you feedback in the form of  annotations on your papers to help guide you.  In addition, you may come to my office any time by

appointment to review works in progress. ESL students should go to the learning center on a weekly basis. Students will start to see improvement in their writing if they follow these guidelines. 

Your papers will be evaluated accordingly:

An “A” paper is excellent work. The writing style has well-developed paragraphs, excellent grammar, and precise word choice. The organisation is clear and logical. In addition, the ideas are original and show critical thinking. 

A “B” paper is good work. It may have many of the virtues of the A paper; however, one or more of the parts is missing. Some examples may be awkward sentence structure, excessive spelling mistakes or coherency problems. 

A “C” paper is satisfactory work. In general the paper satisfies the requirements; however, several problems make it difficult to understand or prevent it from getting its point across effectively. In addition there are several flaws in the writing style and grammar. This paper would need to be edited again before accepting the final copy. 

A “D” paper is unsatisfactory. Some aspects of the document may be well done, but overall there are significant and numerous problems with its conception and/or execution. 

An “F” paper is failing work. It is submitted after the deadline, does not fulfil the requirements of the assignment and/or is extremely difficult to understand.1.

*Please note – this syllabus is subject to change according to the needs of the class. This means that I reserve the right to make changes. Should you be absent from class, please contact a classmate to get the assignment and make up the work you have missed.

Wed., Aug. 28  Introduction & Orientation. Lecture on elements of literature: plot/theme.

                          Reading assignment: Bedford pp1-40 The Writing Process and Patterns

                          Reading Critically pp. 1-47./pp.49-77 Sandra Cisneros, Only Daughter 

Mon., Sept. 2            LABOR DAY HOLIDAY

Wed., Sept. 4            Discussion of Only Daughter. Lecture on narrative technique & theme

                        Analysis. Read: Bedford pp.137-152 Critical Reading 

Mon., Sept. 9   Workshop I : Stages of the writing process: finding a topic, narrowing it,

                           writing a  thesis statement.

Wed., Sept. 11            Theme Analysis workshop II / Read: Patterns, Once More to the Lake 

Mon., Sept. 16            Discuss Once More to the Lake, by E.B. White/Theme analysis

                        Re-read class notes and two short stories

Wed., Sept. 18            In-class writing assignment #1 – Open book.  20%

                        Read:  Comparison & Contrast/Patterns pp. 321-339. Two Ways to Belong

                        To America, p.357 

Mon., Sept. 23            Lecture on Comparison & Contrast format and structure

                        Discuss Two Ways to Belong to America. Read: Memoirs of a Bilingual

                        Childhood by Richard Rodriguez  (handout).

Wed., Sept. 25            Discuss Memoirs. Analyse content & structure. Homework : work on essay 

Mon., Sept. 30            Comparison & contrast workshop I

Wed., Oct. 2            C & C workshop II / Homework:  finish c&c essay 

Mon., Oct. 7            C&C essays due at beginning of class./ Lecture on collaborative c&c

                        assignment : format, structure, topics, presentation.  

Wed., Oct. 9    Collaborative Workshop I: determine topic & focus,distribute workload Homework : do writing and/or research 

Mon., Oct. 14   Collaborative Workshop II: review information gathered, first draft

concept / Homework: work on individual essay/ write collaborative

draft

Wed., Oct. 16            Collaborative Workshop II: polish second collaborative draft. Organize

                        Presentation & visuals.  Homework:  polish final collaborative conceptual

                        Draft / finish individual C&C essays. 

Mon., Oct. 21            All C&C individual and group papers due at beginning of class

                        Presentations for Group I & II. Feedback per video.

Wed., Oct. 23            Presentations for Group III & IV. Feedback per video.

                        Read: Patterns: Media Violence pp. 569-5802.

                                   Bedford: pp. 157-177 

Mon., Oct. 28            Lecture on Argument & Persuasion strategies. Inductive / deductive

                        Reasoning.  Read: Unnatural Killers by John Grisham in Patterns

Wed., Oct. 30            Discussion of Media Violence/thinking and writing critically 

Mon., Nov. 4            Discuss & analyze Unnatural Killers.                       

Wed., Nov. 6            Avoiding logical fallacies

 Read : What’s Next – A Movie Made Me Do It? By Oliver Stone/Patterns

Homework: work on A&P papers. 

Mon., Nov. 11            Discuss & analyze What’s Next.

Wed., Nov. 13 Writing & grammar workshop/polishing your style. Homework: work on A&P papers. 

Mon., Nov. 18            Workshop: A&P oral debate / argument strategies

Wed., Nov. 20 Workshop II: finalization of concept. Homework: complete final draft of A&P essays.

Mon., Nov. 25            A&P essays Due at beginning of class – 20%.

                        Debates (A&P).

Wed., Nov. 27            Writing critically / Handout. 

Mon., Dec. 2            Writing critically / Handout.

Wed., Dec. 4            In-class writing assignment #2.  20%